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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
First, if I had to rate it like a real critique, here would be my stars:
Vision:
Originality:
Technique:
Impact:
Now for the actual critique! To start off, I really like the colors you used, with all the browns and dark ambers; it reminds me of autumn! The colors together also look really pretty in the eye. Not only are the colors wonderful but the pattern inside the eye is beautiful too; like the print of an animal. Technically or mechanically, the blur and sharpness are very well done and are pretty much in all the right places. If I had to give one piece of constructive critisism, I'd have to say that although the eye has the perfect amount of clarity, there's a little too much bluriness in the bottom right corner where the bottom lashes are; to me, which is my opinion, the change between sharp and blurry looks so abrupt, not gradual.
Overall, wonderful job!
~PsychologicalToaster~
Congrats!